Just make the few changes I suggested and your letter will be perfect!
只要改動我提到的個別地方，你的信就會很完美了。
瘋狂英語拿手好戲卡
世界上最完美的對話之一（二）
?? 句中詞匯解析
從本句中提取的重要詞匯
adj. 完美的;正確的;優秀的;極好的;
n. [語]完成時;
?? per全部+fect做→全部做完→完美的；完全的
"Everyone liked my father—he was the perfect gentleman."
大家都喜歡我父親—他是真正的君子。
近義：improve, purify, refine, upgrade, better, meliorate
反義：incomplete, bad, sketchy, unaccomplished, uncompleted, unfinished
n. 信;證書，許可證;字母，文字;字面意義;
vt. 用字母標明;寫字母于;加標題;
vi. 寫印刷體字母;
"a letter of accreditation"
一份合格證明書
近義：label, mark, docket, missive, note, epistle