Just make the few changes I suggested and your letter will be perfect!
只要改動(dòng)我提到的個(gè)別地方,你的信就會(huì)很完美了。
The wagging dance of the honey bee, therefore, did show the direction of a feeding place.
如果喂食地點(diǎn)背離太陽(yáng),搖擺舞的直線部分就朝下。因此,蜜蜂的搖擺舞的確表示喂食點(diǎn)的方向。